Essay Draft Here is my instructor’s comment with my annotated bibliography abou

Essay Draft
Here is my instructor’s comment with my annotated bibliography about Neurodiversity is diversity. I will upload files in the control panel
Your sources meet the criteria, and your annotations are solid.
I am concerned about your research question. By this point, it should be different from the prompt and should reflect the more specific focus of your research. You have clearly chosen to focus on Alzheimer’s which is fine. But what in particular about Alzheimer’s are you interested in? Without knowing what your question is, I can’t really tell whether the sources you’ve chosen are relevant or not.
For Essay draft, you will need to make a critical argument about your topic. You will need to take a stand that is arguable— something that someone else could reasonably disagree with— and make your case. Have to come up with an argument.
Required components:
Thesis statement
Topic sentences
Evidence
Analysis and Discussion