I’m working on a english writing question and need the explanation and answer to

I’m working on a english writing question and need the explanation and answer to help me learn. I would like you to write a 500 words essay for my scholarship for nursing school. I am in second semester of nursing school . This is the question- “Please share with the committee something unique about yourself” .I am kinda prepared a essay but i don’t know if it is good or not and it is less than 500 words. Can you please modify it and give me an answer. Thank You!