Ok, I really screwed up on this assignment. Original instructions are here: Dir

Ok, I really screwed up on this assignment.
Original instructions are here:
Directions
For this assignment, you will pick one recommended screening from United States Preventive Task Force A and B Recommendations. (cervical cancer screening)
An initiative is a project, an event, so something in the community is ideal. Workplace location for employees is fine too. Please include the following suggested level one headings so content is clear and easily identified.
Theory or Conceptual Model
Identify a health promotion program theory or conceptual model and describe.
Explain how the model or theory applies to the initiative is present.
Population Screening Purpose
Identify the screening topic as an A or B preventive screening from the USPSTF.
Include two components of topic related community statistics numerically (e.g., mortality, prevalence).
Describe target population characteristics.
Include age and sex or risk factor and matches the guidelines.
Clarify the county and or neighborhood of the population.
Provide descriptions on the local population to be screened, including three components: number of persons in the county possibly affected based on sex, age, and racial diversity of the county or state.
Include current rates of screening or factors that would impact the need for screening.
Location/ Setting
Demonstrate details of the community or workplace event, including three components: type of area or building, time, and day (e.g., Monroe County Senior Center at 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. 4/20/21).
Include reasoning and explanation of appropriateness.
Screening Activity
Screening activity plan meets the preventive guidelines process, is descriptive, and includes:
Education component description
Measures tested
Shows evidence the tests are aligned with guideline recommendations
Demonstrates possible positive measure/ normal and abnormal ranges
Follow up and referral content process included
Three clear and measurable outcome goals are included
Explanation of how each outcome is affected by the activity
Cost
Detailed cost analysis to perform screening is provided in table form includes the six following line items but not limited to a table containing:
Testing instrument costs with source for pricing
Staff costs- as appropriate for screening
Rental cost- estimate
Simple supply costs
Any attendee cost
Total
(May use volunteer staff but not donations of items. Cost analysis for feasibility needs demonstrated.) Cost analysis total and summary statement should be included.
Summary
Provide a summary of your screening, general benefit to the community, and why it is important. A person should be able to read your paper and understand fully what you are screening, where, when, the costs, and how it is supported in the guideline. Ideally, a person would be able to duplicate your screening initiative based on the clarity you present.
Format expectations:
Paper length paper should be 3–4 pages of content.
Follows APA in paper format, reference page, in-text citations, or headings.
Uses four or more credible peer-reviewed sources.
You are to plan an event. This should not be an event to screen 3 million women (which is what I did, whoops). This should be a manageable event with clear details. Each bullet point under each section MUST be met. So under the population screenpurposes, all 7 bulletin points needs to be addressed.
The location needs to be specific, what building, what is the exactlocation. The amount of ppl being screened and will be at hte location has to be acceptable to the time frame provided.
Under the screening activity, remember again, every bulletin point needs tto be addressed from above, i need to have that paragrah fixed to include how will this activity take place, who will be involved, what are the normal and abnormal ranges, and what’s the follow up?
Under the cost portion, in the paper attached you will see there’s a small chart. but it must include more details, but might be better to be completely re-done. But for instance “cost of testing instruments” what are they . Staff sccreening costs “what staff is that?, nurses or volunteers?’ Cost of attendee shoudl not be 2000$, so probably free?
If you read each bulletin point, it is very clear what detail is needed in the paper. each bulletin point must be addressed.
mostly i missed the mark on the assingment, and odn’t have time to rewrite the paper, the body is there, there are references, hopefully you won’t need to look for more. the idea is there, it just is not concise, and was too enthusiastic. It needs to be scaled down and simplified into an event that is very specific. think of it as if you were inviting someone to a party, the details for location/time/event etc that would be needed.
Original submitted paper is attached.