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This paper was written by one of the writers that works for essays sharks with run-ons and, grammatical errors I am mad about that. now it needs to be edited.  I need to attached two files one from the prof with when she highlighted the mistakes that I made and the other one that I submitted which you can down load and fix the errors and add what needs to be added or remove, as well as the instruction. the document that says final paper is the one you can download to edit. page 8-12 is the break down of my break I just copied and pasted it so you can see why I got 75 and fix it please.
this is the instruction on how the paper was suppose to be written and what was ask also.
The Institute of Medicine (IOM) has described five core competencies required of health professionals to improve professional practice and patient outcomes (IOM, 2003). Quality and Safety Education for Nurses (QSEN) has expanded these to include knowledge, skills and attitudes (KSAs) that nurses demonstrate in six areas (Cronenwett, et al., 2007):
Patient-Centered Care.
Teamwork and Collaboration.
Evidence-based Practice.
Quality Improvement.
Informatics.
Safety (added by QSEN).
For this writing assignment, you are to focus on one of the Core Competencies:
Describe one of the IOM Core Competencies (CCs), and the impact it has on patient care outcomes.
Research the CC in peer-reviewed, scholarly sources (at least 3 sources in addition to your text, and all peer-reviewed sources must be published within the past 5 years) and reflect upon these articles to form an independent opinion of how to best improve patient outcomes by increasing awareness of the CCs you have chosen.
Describe three ways in which you can positively impact your clinical practice and patient care outcomes with your chosen CCs.
Think about the current challenges in health care delivery and report on potential barriers to implementing the strategies you have suggested.
There are no right or wrong answers, only more or less reflection and research. However, you should keep these guidelines in mind as you write:
An abstract is required.
Follow APA guidelines for paper format, grammar & language.
Use in-text citations and list references from scholarly and peer-reviewed sources.
Length: 4-6 pages of text (not including the abstract, title page, references, etc).