This is supposed to be an edited paper. Please follow all corrections linked bel

This is supposed to be an edited paper. Please follow all corrections linked below! I provided you with my paper, the prompt, and the corrections LISTED OUT in order. The edited paper MUST have all of these corrections made to it.
I need an argument in my paper, and that is my main concern. I need an A+, and feel free to use broader vocablary and context you find as well.