Since I already have the paper done. Please only follow the comment and edit. Yo

Since I already have the paper done. Please only follow the comment and edit. You only need to add the words that the comment mention about. maybe more words talk about specific recommendations for improving HRM. After edit, Please give me 6 slides with the main point. Thanks!
Comment: In each section any additional information you can provide to further elaborate your analysis will provided a clearer vision of your research and further support your final section, your recommendations.
• Description of the organization, including its mission, size, and types of employees.
• Leader and organizational philosophy/approaches to motivation and commitment.
• Major human resource management policies.
• Assessment of the effectiveness of HRM in the organization, including fit
between philosophy and operating policies.
• Specific recommendations for improving HRM.