My project requested two items: (1) a presentation (powerpoint or even script) d

My project requested two items: (1) a presentation (powerpoint or even script) due on Nov30 11:00pm and (2) a final research report due on Dec06 11:00pm.
This is a qualitative approach research report, therefore the data collection method is interviewing 4 Taiwaneses (Results and discussion can be just created but need to be reasonable.)
I have a draft (C- grade, provided with the grade descriptors)with professor’s comment (but without Abstract (150 words), Findings, Discussion and Conclusion parts). Please amend my draft according to professor’s comment (For introduction, the main problem is length and organization) and complete other parts.
Two final annotated final report (B- grade) is attached for reference. If other lecture notes (or samples for different parts) are needed, I can provide.