i will attach my draft, please check it using the rubric, structure and organiza

i will attach my draft, please check it using the rubric, structure and organization and instructions attached.(my draft should answer the questions mentioned in the imp guidelines attached) and please reduce the word count to 510 without removing important information, you can if thers is something missing but keep the word count 510. if the points are not related to my curricular events ( dental student) remove them and write one that is related. please again check if everything is included by following the rubric because im aiming for a full mark so feel free to change or add things accordingly. thank you in advance.
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Discipline: english and dental medicine