I need a thesis proposal to present to my instructor. One of the questions my pr

I need a thesis proposal to present to my instructor. One of the questions my professor told me is <
What is the research you are trying to do?<
Why is it important?<
What I am trying to solve? <
What is problem? <
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Here are the topics I would like to cover in the thesis.<
– Automobile industry<
– Comparison between other industries<
– Why is it important<
– Improve safety<
– Cost<
– Productivity<
– Apply lean in the office areas<
– Improves communication within organizations <
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Attached is what I put together.<