Hello, You worked on my topics and references portion for my capstone project ab

Hello,
You worked on my topics and references portion for my capstone project about two weeks ago. We are now moving on to the Introduction portion. I have included an attachment of the Introduction Guidelines and the portion you previously worked on. I added a paragraph in your previous work because it didn’t mention what the Independent and dependent variables were and she wanted that in the Topics and Reference portion. So, when working on the introduction portion please keep in mind that they have to be discussed and look at first paragraph of the attachment for reference.
The professor provided feedback on my previous assignment after submission and I have included the feedback below, please review it. I also discussed with her that when conducting the study, I will focus on women ages 18-35 for the data collection portion, which will come in the next assignment in about 4 weeks, however, this should be briefly mentioned in the abstract for this new assignment. Thank you very much for everything, and please reach out to me if you have any questions or if there are any confusion because this is crucial for my grade, thank you.
Professor Feedback
Hi, Aleris:
I believe you’ve presented a topic in which is incredibly relevant and applicable within the present culture. As mentioned prior, you may want to consider variations such as age, gender, race, SES and personality characteristics in which can influence the results. I look forward to reading your research further.