For this revised paper could you switch the writing terms to architectural terms

For this revised paper could you switch the writing terms to architectural terms and could you add about air quality in the area and if it is possible to build a hospital by a hotel.
As you know
Architectural site analysis, is the process of evaluating a particular locations physical, mental and social characteristics with the ambition of developing an architectural solution that will both address and enhance its internal and external context.
“To develop a project of any merit, its site must first be measured”
Every site is unique and will consist of many complex elements such as: varying topography, watercourses, trees, plants, habitats, and weather patterns to name a few. All of which will and should influence an architect’s design process and decision-making.
Bring your ideas on how the following connect your project:
Location
Geography:
Weather/Seasons
Ecology
Plant, Animals
Topography
Scale
Services
Existing Structures
Access/ Transport/ Connection to a larger urban form/region/ etc
Please submit a draft context statement that richly illustrates the conditions that your project addresses in terms of the scale, geography, topology, ecology, accessibility, weather, elemental forces that affect your site and its design. Dive deep and focus on the most important elements of context that your project is factoring in. People can be included here but can also be written about in the program statement portion of your degree project book (coming up).
Reminder that if you are still undecided on a specific geographic site, you can be projective or proscriptive in describing the ground conditions that your project is addressing in this statement.
While not just about the site, here’s a real world example of a firm’s project/ site/ program statement to help you out. Notice the clarity and simplicity of walking us through the site/program/ and process of this project in development.

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