Category: College Applications

What should the admissions committee know beyond what’s written in my application documents?
What should the admissions committee know beyond what’s written in my application documents?
1. I am a first-generation bachelor’s degree graduate and soon-to-be first-generation graduate student.
2. Despite facing numerous obstacles, I have triumphed over adversity.
3. I experienced profound loss when both my parents passed away within a year of each other when I was seven years old.
4. The death of my brother at 21 in 2018 led to a period of severe depression.
5. In 2019, at 23 years old, I moved to Colorado, leaving behind my family on the East Coast. I started a new job, bought a house the following year, and battled COVID-19 during the pandemic, which, combined with the depression from being away from my siblings, impacted my academic performance.
6. Growing up without my parents had a significant impact on me, making me realize the lack of foundation in my life as I grew older. However, over the past four years, I have undergone significant personal growth in my academics, personal life, emotional, and mental well-being.
7. I moved out at 19 years old after completing one semester in college. Things were tough for me as I struggled to make ends meet, focus on school, and have a social life at 19.
8. I was raised by my aunt and cousins in a Christian household.
9. I am recognized as a natural leader who accomplishes tasks effectively both at school and in my community.
10. I am deeply passionate about being a source of positivity and assistance to those around me, while also establishing healthy boundaries.
11. I actively volunteer at the food bank in my community.
12. My parents immigrated to the US in pursuit of the American dream, and I consider myself to be the embodiment of that dream.

Make sure you can speak Chinese, I write my personal information in Chinese. total three parts, PS( personal statement), CV( Curriculum Vitae), and RL (a letter of recommendation)
I am going to apply to university. (0Master program, major nursing) YOU need to help me finish my personal statement(500words), Curriculum Vitae and a Letter of recommendation.
For Personal statement and Curriculum Vitae I will provide some successful examples.
You need to finish them based on my personal information.
I already written my Curriculum Vitae rough draft, I need you to polish it and correct its format.

I need a tutor who has helped students apply successfully to the university before.
( make sure you have successful cases, I need to go through your case first) .
If 8you do not have experience with polish personal statements before, please do not take this order!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
I am going to apply for 8 universities, So there are a total 8 personal statements you need to polish and proofread。
Not only one, you need to polish 8 PS. I will upload them one by one to you .
I will submit them One by one, it means after you finish one of six and submit them here to me, Then I will upload the second one PS to you, and then you can continue to work, remember, total is 8 PS.
you need to mark the polished part.(as images I upload shows) use different colors to show your polishment and add some Review & critique
Make sure you go through the documents I sent to you, it will help write PS.
You need to provide :
In-depth proofreading
Grammar + syntax review
line edit
rewriting( Only you think my work is too bad quality, you can based on my information to rewrite it )
Word-choice suggestions
Sentence review + restructuring
Ensuring consistency and overall flow
Detailed content review and comprehensive feedback to ensure my application stands out
Multiple revisions to perfect your statement
in-depth review of my statement, improving grammar, style, flow + detailed feedback.

Last semester I enrolled in a class, and before starting the class, I called the school to drop it off becase I was already enrolled in two more classes and It was too much for me. I spoke to NORA the advisor from MDC, and i was told that the class was going to be dropped. Apparently, they did not dropped me from that class and i received an F as a grade. I need a 1 page letter for my Financial Aid explaining what happened, and why I need to obtain financial aid for my future classes.

I need a tutor who helped students apply successfully to the university before. ( make sure you have successful cases, I need to go through your case first) . If you do not have experience before, please do not take this order!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
Total has 4 questions
you need to mark the polished part.(as images I upload shows) use different colors to show your polishment and add some reviews
Make sure you go through the documents I sent to you, it will be helpful for writing PS.
I need a high-quality PS.

I need a tutor who helped students apply successfully to the university before. ( make sure you have successful cases, I need to go through your case first) . If you do not have experience before, please do not take this order!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
There are Two PS work you need to finish.( two different students, do not mix them up)
One is Sharon( 4 questions, each one answer cannot exceed 350words)
and another one is Zia( 600 words)
you need to mark the polished part.(as images I upload shows) use different colors to show your polishment and add some reviews
Make sure you go through the documents I sent to you, it will be helpful for writing PS.
I need a high-quality PS.

I am going to apply the postgraduate program（MSc in Strategic and Digital Marketing (SDM)）for university.(Rennes School of Business)
YOU can get information about this major from:https://www.rennes-sb.com/msc-strategic-digital-ma…
EACH question answer should be 150-200 words.
Total has 6 questions, I already finish 3 of them.
you just need to finish 3 questions.

I am going to apply the postgraduate program（MSc in Strategic and Digital Marketing (SDM)）for university.(Rennes School of Business)
Total has 5 questions!( you need to finish this questions first, then I can send you next four questions)
NOT ONLY ONE QUESTION. EACH question answer should be 120-150 words. I cannot see next questions unless I submit this first
First question:
How do you see yourself making a contribution to your field or society in the future?

I am going to apply the postgraduate program（MSc in Strategic and Digital Marketing (SDM)）for university.(Rennes School of Business)
Total has 5 questions!( you need to finish this questions first, then I can send you next four questions)
NOT ONLY ONE QUESTION. EACH question answer should be 120-150 words. I cannot see next questions unless I submit this first
First question:
How do you see yourself making a contribution to your field or society in the future?

Please describe how you have prepared for your intended major, including your readiness to succeed in your upper-division courses once you enroll at the university
Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.
Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?
What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time? Things you should know: My desired major is political science, I am a first generation student, I am an immigrant, when I enrolled into first grade I only spoke Spanish and had to learn before the school year ended or I would be held back and I was able to learn English because my first grade teacher helped me a lot. I struggle a lot with mental health, I have bipolar depression, anxiety, have had attempts of suicide, am in the progress of getting an adhd diagnosis and that caused me to struggle a lot in the first 2 years of college but I am doing better now (transferring to a university after 3 years of community college) I write a lot, mostly in English, I like writing short stories, poems, essays etc. I love reading and analyzing text. I am queer. I am not out because it’s not safe to be.
If you need any more information let me know. 350 words max for each question, so 1,400 words.