-part one was done I will attach it but the professor left feedback which said

-part one was done I will attach it but the professor left feedback which said
Try to refine your RQ a bit. Perhaps focusing on a specific country in Asia may help center your case study project.
Your introduction has a few grammatical errors and points of confusion that make it harder to understand – be sure to fix these errors before submitting part 2!
Your introduction notes various types of crimes including human trafficking, drug smuggling, organized crime, and terrorism. All these topics can be case study focuses in themselves – choose one to focus on rather than all 4, as they will each be influenced by globalization in vastly different ways.
– I would prefer if either human trafficking or drug smuggling was chosen for the topic, I will also attach part one so you. can use it to help, I don’t have scholarly articles to attach besides the ones already chosen for the different topics so those will need to be found thank you