revise the attached essay to fit how the sample (attached) appears. follow the g

revise the attached essay to fit how the sample (attached) appears. follow the guidelines in both the rubric and the bullets below. use the same thesis that is in the essay. just revise it to make it good
● Process: Complete the steps in the research process (provided on Canvas) and begin with a focus question, which will evolve into a thesis statement.
● Structure: Must follow a classical argumentative structure (outline provided), and include a controversial thesis statement that takes a position, properly framed quotes and ways of responding. They Say, I Say will help with writing and it offers templates.
● Organization: Must include an introduction and thesis, several body paragraphs with supportive evidence, naysayer paragraph, conclusion and separate works cited page in correct MLA style.
● Naysayer: Must include at least one naysayer paragraph that usually appears as the first or last body paragraph.
A Note About Sources: you may apply any and all sources from class. All sources must be
formatted in MLA style: “Undocumented Lovers” (Krystal Sital), Two Ways to Belong in
America (Bharati MukherJee), “The America I Love” (Ellie Weisel), Class Discussion Forum
Posts (individual primary source, citation is similar to a blog), “Illegal Immigration Debate”
(Procon.org), and at least two BCC library database articles.
● Content: Must be 5-7 pages of content with at least five reliable sources (two or more from the library database).
● Sources: 5 or more – procon.org, pewresearch.org, two or more sources from the library database, other reliable