These are my professor’s comments about the essay, not also it has to be 3 pages

These are my professor’s comments about the essay, not also it has to be 3 pages without the photo and the references page. Look at the comments and add what he asking for. Thank youHello,
You have some great stuff in here, but it’s not quite clear how these values connect to our culture – where else do we see individuality or where is that important in our culture/society? Where do we see happily ever after narratives in our culture? Do we, as society, want to break away from that?
Make sure it’s clear after each value how it connects to our culture.