Business Model Canvas Amazon Submission Feedback Overall Feedback What you have

Business Model Canvas Amazon
Submission Feedback
Overall Feedback
What you have on value proposition is list of features. You need a value proposition that puts the problem/solution and customer needs at the center.
You need to go into more detail on the customer section what you have is vague. You need to clearly identify you target markets. “All persons…” is never a customer segment.
Your backend seems to be addressing the broad Amazon company as opposed to your product. Revenue stream is unclear, you need to develop your business model to discuss revenue.

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