DEAR WRITERS, CHECK THE REQUIREMENTS AND ESTIMMATE THE EXTRA PAYMENT Add the con

DEAR WRITERS, CHECK THE REQUIREMENTS AND ESTIMMATE THE EXTRA PAYMENT
Add the conclusion, to the milestone paper
edit the milestone paper to look like the sample
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Historical Section – its reads very jumpy. Work to summarize the changes through the centuries in broad themes.
Keep the topic areas in bold! Governance, Macroeconomics, etc. Your writing appears as if you do not fully understand the concept, reword them, to where you “own” the statements.
Explain why these structural determinants impact your issues or population.
You need to redefine primary and secondary stakeholders; the EPA and CDC would both be on the same level.