Make the following edit to this paper: Just one thing on the explanation of secr

Make the following edit to this paper:
Just one thing on the explanation of secruity architecture. Can it be slightly in depth maybe detailed framework components, benefits example how ithelps risk managment or compliance and overall security strategy. How it aligns with the organizations goals aswell would be nice I think. And small overview of implementation approach probably. Other than some small added things to detailed secruity architecture NO PLAGIARISM OR BAD GRAMMAR