OTHER: Please revise based on the following comment:- You have a good start here

OTHER: Please revise based on the following comment:- You have a good start here, but you are too broad in scope for your audience right now.This needs to be local if you look at the assignment sheet. So, I recommend that you just focus on how you can address this issue locally (e.g. at your specific program, for example). Otherwise, it looks like you are on the right track!
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PREVIOUS PAPER INSTRUCTIONS (#537333226): Requirements
For any of these topics, please note the following:
Your essay, letter, or email should…
• establish the problem or issue using evidence (this can be things you observed, an interview, your personal experience, etc),
• suggest a solution to the problem (this is the policy or procedure change),
• be written to a specific audience who could implement your proposed change,
• include steps needed to implement the solution, and
• include a refutation (counterargument) section.
If you are writing about your workplace or a small community/organization, I recommend that you do not identify anyone by their actual name for this class assignment. Make up the name of your company or audience, for instance, to preserve confidentiality. (Basically, if you’d be concerned about someone at your workplace reading this, use pseudonyms/fake names).
Topic:- The Financial Burden of Lengthy Radiology Internships
1. What is the issue? Explain the issue and why it’s a problem.
The issue I would like to address is the significant financial burden that radiology internships impose on students. These internships necessitate a 24-month full-time commitment and do not provide any financial compensation. Furthermore, interns must pay $7,000 to participate in the program. This is an issue that is deeply concerning for several reasons. First, it is a significant obstacle for radiology aspirants who may possess the necessary skills and commitment but need the financial means to sustain such a burden. Second, this practice can lead to a lack of diversity in radiology, as less affluent students may find it extremely difficult to enter the field. Finally, this financial burden may lead to a decrease in patient care as skilled radiologists are deterred from entering the field.
2. What is the solution that you are proposing to solve this issue?
In order to address the financial burden associated with long-term radiology training, I suggest a two-pronged approach. First, radiology training should be converted into paid internships. By providing interns with equitable remuneration for their efforts, we can mitigate the immediate financial hardship they experience during their training. Second, institutions offering such internships should consider offering financial aid to cover the internship fee of $7,000. This approach will ensure that financial restrictions allow qualified individuals to pursue radiology careers. These two solutions aim to provide a more equal and accessible path to radiology.
3. Who can make this change? Explain who your audience will be for this paper and why they are the best audience for this.
This change can be made by colleges and authorities within medical institutions responsible for overseeing radiology internships. These entities not only possess the necessary authority but also have the capacity to make significant structural changes to radiology internship programs. As the primary providers of medical training and education, they have an intrinsic interest in ensuring that radiology is not only accessible but also truly diversified and inclusive. Therefore, they are well-positioned to take the lead in eliminating the financial burden of long-term radiological internships, thereby promoting a more just and equitable future for radiologists.
4. How do you imagine that your audience will respond to this proposal? (i.e. will they agree there is a problem and be likely to listen? Will they get defensive? Will they argue that there isn’t a problem at all? Really try to imagine telling this person this. What are some potential issues with your solution that they might bring up?)
I anticipate a wide range of responses to this proposal when presented to the targeted audience. Some will likely recognize the problem and be willing to consider the proposed solutions, especially if they have personally experienced the financial challenges radiology interns face or are concerned about the need for more diversity in the field. On the other hand, I should be prepared for opposition to this proposal. Some may claim that internships are an extension of education and that education costs are standard. Others may be concerned about budget limitations within medical institutions and ask if they can afford payment or financial assistance programs. To address these objections, I will need to present well-argued and evidence-based arguments.
5. What genre are you planning to write in (email, letter, or essay) and why?
To effectively communicate the intricacy and significance of this subject, an essay is the most appropriate genre for this argument. An essay format offers the necessary structure and depth to investigate the subject matter thoroughly, provide ample evidence, and formulate logical arguments supporting the suggested solutions. Additionally, it allows for a thorough analysis of research, statistical data, and case studies to support our arguments. An essay format also conveys an academic and professional tone of voice, which is particularly important when dealing with medical institutions and practitioners prioritizing evidence-based discussion and analysis.