Hello, Below you will see all the things that need to be fixed in this paper. P

Hello,
Below you will see all the things that need to be fixed in this paper. Please do it! Also, attached is the comments that the teacher made on the paper. And then I am attaching the paper you will be using to make all the changes. You will see one says revision in the name of the file.
Part One of your SLR provides solid background information and you clearly state your research question. Although, there is a huge chunk of information that needs to be included with the background information or removed all together (see my in-text notes).
As you make revisions to part one please consider the following:
1. follow the outline in the syllabus for the SLR
2. Consider how you connect this to your concentration (i.e., leadership & administration, clinical social work, military behavioral health, or social work education).
3. Consider how to merge the information page 6-9 with the background information
4. Determine if the theoretical section is necessary. I do not think it’s needed for this paper, because I don’t see the purpose. It’s needed for the conceptual paper.