Do you find any parts unclear, confusing, or undeveloped?

Second, select one section of the Revision WorksheetDownload Revision Worksheet. Copy and paste it into your initial discussion post and answer the questions you selected using the essay you selected in the first step. Be sure to indicate which essay you have chosen to discuss at the top of your post.
Third, select and answer one of the following questions:
2. Which part of the draft interests you the most? Why?
3. Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation? Where do you need less?
4. Do you find any parts unclear, confusing, or undeveloped? Identify and explain.