File to be revised is the attachment i uploaded titled my draft. Refer to my mes

File to be revised is the attachment i uploaded titled my draft. Refer to my messages. According to the new resources I’ve attached about introductions, please modify the intro so it meets all the requirements of the intro. Remember that the summary in the introduction should be 3 sentences or less. I’m willing to pay more if needed. I’ve also added some sentence starters so if you can use it to make better transitions for the rest of the essay you may do so. The hook should be interesting however not a quote or question as stated in the introduction slides. The intro should have the hook, bridge, summary, and thesis. I just added the essay evaluation rubric. Please look at that and reflect back on your work. Modify the essay so it suits all needs of the rubric and is worth 100/100 points. I did make some revisions of the last version you did and I attached it so please revise on my new file not the last one you wrote. It’s not major adjustments, just some minor adjustments.