Hello, I have a first draft (3 pages) of an essay with feedback specifically on

Hello,
I have a first draft (3 pages) of an essay with feedback specifically on the highlighted sentences if tapped on, I will attach it as a pdf below. I will also attach my paper instructions as a photo below. So basically, what is needed is to turn this 3 page first draft into an overall 5 page final draft with the feedback given. Prompt: “What is the function that art plays in Oscar Wilde’s The Picture of Dorian Gray?” (Oscar Wilde’s The Picture of Dorian Gray) BOOK – This is the overall feedback, other than the highlighted specific feedback, which is NOT in the pdf: Focus first on developing your close readings. So far in this draft there are none, so you need to locate which claims you want to make and then find quotations or details from the text that you want to use as evidence to develop these ideas further. – I am not yet seeing an original central claim in your introduction, and am seeing snippets of claims in the paragraphs but which are also not yet fully articulated. Start first with your close readings, and then work through what claims you are making.
Thank you,
Good luck.