I need a conclusion paragraph and a little revising for the last paragraph. You

I need a conclusion paragraph and a little revising for the last paragraph. You don’t need to change any information, just help me make it more fluent to read. For the conclusion paragraph, I expect it to summarize the tension in the art The Fallen Star (expectation and observation), connect it the personal experience, go through the problem(lose sense of belonging) and the solution(realize the uniqueness of everyone). It should be about 300 words.