the paper need to be edited throughly to follow proffessional way of writing res

the paper need to be edited throughly to follow proffessional way of writing research the three parts need to be edited abstract, background of the study, problem statements and objectives..
be mindful of the findings to match with your correction.
also the conceptual framework and the way of presenting the findings according to regressinal analysis model.. the work is too long unecesarrily so shorten it.. i upload also the previous comments from supersors befor this (final revise )which you have to work on it work please take a look and respond them..
finaly be free to add anything you think will improve this work