I need an essay about racism, 1000-1200 words, this going to be 2nd draft of tha

I need an essay about racism, 1000-1200 words, this going to be 2nd draft of that essay, I already have draft 1 with the professor’s notes and based on them I have to write draft 2. In this essay, there are 3 sources that are from Kingsborough databases and I have an annotated bibliography about them. these 3 sources should be in the essay. NO SIMILARITY, NO COPING FROM GOOGLE, I WILL GET 0, 3-4% SIMILARITY IS ALLOWED!!! I will upload all the necessary information like – essay draft 1 with PROFESSOR’S NOTES, and an annotated bibliography for sources. I need this essay to be written in simple words please, you will see how it is in draft 1. Also for the last order with you, I got a note from the professor that it seems like it was written by several people, please don’t do that.
pay attention to the professor’s notes, please.
This is a good essay. You have done your research and are supporting your ideas with it. However, there is little connection between the paragraphs, and I do not understand the link between your arguments.
Now I will ask you to:
1. Double space your essay. Use a header with your name, class, and date.
2. Work on the sentence structure. I see a lot of comma splices (you connect two separate sentences with a comma instead of using a period).
3. Your in-text citations have a wrong format. You should only use last name and page number. (Smith 54), for example. Lower case letters except for the first letter of the name.
4. Works cited page follows a wrong format as well. Go back to the documents I provided and work on them or use the citation tool KBCC databases provide. List your sources alphabetically.
follow my notes in the body of your essay.