I NEED A HIGH QUALITY PAPER WITH ZERO PLAGIARISM I attached the outline, the ins

I NEED A HIGH QUALITY PAPER WITH ZERO PLAGIARISM
I attached the outline, the instructions and the draft. I include the message for the draft only to take in count. You need to use the draft in the paper but not all. Only some parts because mostly you need to write the essay
This is one of the three comments I have got from Someone on the rough draft : I enjoyed reading your essay. I feel you accurately analyze Del Toro’s films and his overall cinematic style as a storyteller. However, as you state in your thesis statement, “it is imperative to understand how Del Toro’s message is relevant in addressing societal challenges today” I would suggest that you try to weave in more examples of monstrosity and otherness with contemporary examples. Also, what is the Title of your essay? This might help understand the meaning behind what you write about and what message you want us to understand. Lastly, I would recommend you try to clean-up some of the grammar and sentence structure in some paragraphs there seems a bit of a disconnect. Other than that, looks good!
I will send you another comments later