I already have an outline, but I need it edited going by my teacher’s suggestion

I already have an outline, but I need it edited going by my teacher’s suggestions which I will send to you. I also need a rough draft of the essay by tomorrow night. It does not need to be perfect. I just need something to turn in. I will need the final paper in one week. I can push the due date back if you need me to in order to reflect the final due date. I was unable to upload the rubric so I will copy it all here. Tomorrow is project 2b that’s due. I know it’s soon, so I’m honestly ok if you don’t put full effort into the rough draft as long as the final is great! 🙂
I have a copy of my outline and also my teacher’s suggestions. I would like for you to include the outline with suggestions added/fixed/changed along with the rough draft (project 2b) for tomorrow night.
Here is the guidelines. Please see 2b guidelines for rough draft due tomorrow night.
ESSAY:
Your essay will be structured as an illustration essay with a minimum of 1,500 words.
It must address the following to demonstrate a thorough analysis:
• You will use a minimum of three precedents as examples to illustrate your thesis. Your
examples must be strong, relevant, and clear. They must be relevant and support the
central claim and reasons with strong facts and thorough details.
• At least one of your examples must come from this class.
• You may use the writing technique cause and effect.
In an illustration essay, the organization of your examples is critical to the development of your
argument. Common organizational techniques include listing examples in chronological order, in
order of importance, or from the simple to the complex.
Your main argument/claim must be clear, and your reasoning must be strong. The writing must
clearly, concisely, and thoroughly analyzes the information presented. It must end with a
compelling conclusion that clearly relates to the main idea. Your writing must maintain a formal
and objective tone throughout. Strong organization and transitional language must be used
skillfully throughout. Mechanics must reflect careful editing. The Writing Centers at Harvard and
The University of North Carolina (UNC) have produced a number of guides on many essay writing
topics ranging from thesis sentences, outlines, introductions, conclusions, etc that can help you write
your essay.
RESEARCH: A significant variety of resources, beyond photos and drawings, are essential for the
success of your project. You will need to research the cultural event which your essay is about. You
will also need to research your chosen examples. Documentary videos, articles, books, interviews,
and primary texts from the architect are all needed. A minimum of seven (7) sources are required.
You must have at least three (3) different types of sources. One (1) source must be a peerreviewed paper or journal. Three (3) sources must be about the cultural event your essay is
exploring.
CITATION AND REFERENCE
All references must be cited on a separate page using the provided template in MLA Style.
Google Scholar has an easy tool for copying citations. Additionally, the Purdue Citation Guide is
an excellent resource.
Protocals and Rubric for 2b:
ARCH 521 Modern History and Theory – Project 2 Protocols and Rubric
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PROJECT 2b
1. Main idea or opinion, 11 points
a. Draft must be a minimum of 1,500 words
b. See additional requirements on Project 2 Descriiption page
2. Examples, 11 points
a. See requirements on Project 2 Descriiption page
3. Organization, grammar, usage, and punctuation, 11 points
4. Work cited information, 6 points
a. A minimum of seven (7) total sources
b. A minimum of three (3) different types of sources
c. A minimum of one (1) peer-reviewed paper or journal
d. A minimum of three (3) sources about your chosen cultural event
e. Utilize the template provided
5. Follows protocols, 2 points
a. 8.5 x 11 pdf
b. File naming – see syllabus
c. Include your name, the topic, and our class name (ARCH 521)
Protocals and Rubric for final:
PROJECT FINAL
1. Main idea or opinion, 15 points
a. See requirements on Project 2 Descriiption page
2. Examples, 15 points
a. See requirements on Project 2 Descriiption page
3. Organization, grammar, usage, and punctuation, 15 points
4. Work cited information, 3 points
a. A minimum of seven (7) total sources
b. A minimum of three (3) different types of sources
c. A minimum of one (1) peer-reviewed paper or journal
d. A minimum of three (3) sources about your chosen cultural event
e. Utilize the template provided
5. Follows protocols, 2 points
a. 8.5 x 11 or 11 x 17 pdf
b. File naming – see syllabus
c. Include your name, the topic, and our class name (ARCH 521)
I have uploaded my graded outline with suggestions, and the rubric for 2b and the final. Thank you!! If you need anything, please let me know! Also, I think my instructor is very interested in googie architecture and wants me to talk about that. so please make sure to include googie architecture in the essay! thank you! I have sources, but She does not approve of some of my sourced, so I will need you to find at least a few new sources. Thank you!