Hi, I have attached all of the needed documents for this assignment so it could

Hi, I have attached all of the needed documents for this assignment so it could be understood. I do not need the whole thing done over. I honestly need the assignment which is labeled “Draft” that I have already done to be tweaked to these standards which will be placed below. Just making a few changes to match what the criteria is. The articles that are dropped below have to be referenced within the paper. It is a lot of questionnaires and documents but if you have any questions at all, please reach out to me. My research question is does the risk of crime vary by gender.
Advice from teacher : ” Dr. Chouhy and I reviewed your submission for assignment 1 and would like you to resubmit the assignment. It is unclear in your research question if you will be looking at fear of crime by gender or crime itself. However, the instructions for the assignment were to pick either fear of crime or victimization so if you were thinking of using crime itself it will have to be changed to one of the two topics required.
Also, your hypothesis is currently stated more like a conclusion rather than a guess based on prior research. So, if you are wanting to look at fear of crime in relation to gender a potential hypothesis could be “I hypothesize that men are more likely to be fearful of crime than women”.