Dear expert writer,
(1) I hope you can help me write my undergraduate college application for University of California, based on the drafts I provided, because I believe that my drafts are disorder and might not be a proper answer to the questions, and I hope you can help me change them into well-organized and proper answers to the questions.
(2) I hope you can enrich my essays, especially some details, feelings and specific events to make my essay more competitive and special among other applicants. Just like the reference good essays I attached. If necessary, you can create the samples or content, details, or story.
(3) I hope you can help me enrich and rewrite each of the essays up to 350words, because I think they are too long to be strong and perfect.
(4) If you have any other questions or information, please feel free to contact me.
(5) please try to use advanced vocabulary and good sentences to make the essay more competitive and appeal to the admission officers. I am studying in Tsinghua International school, so more local and literature descriiption will be preferred.
(6) I hope you could give any idea on which topic I should pick up, because the UNIVERSITY OF CALIFORNIA website give me 8 choices below:
1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
2. The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience
3. Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
4. Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
5. Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
6. Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
7. Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
Thank you very much for your time and kind help in my college application!
Regards,
Yoyo
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