This dissertation research paper should be changed according to the feedback my

This dissertation research paper should be changed according to the feedback my supervisor had given which I will provide below. The format will be same as the research paper I have uploaded right now and I will provide a code as well for reference according to that do the editing of the document. In the coding part the front-end is done using React, back-end using Python and MongoDB used as a database
The feedback of the supervisor is as follows:
1) PROBLEM DEFINITION, BACKGROUND, LITERATURE REVIEW, AIM AND OBJECTIVES Problem is poorly defined – or the definition doesn’t match the project! There is no evidence of AI in particular. Lit review was largely irrelevant, as there is nothing on speech generation in the project yet several column inches are devoted to this. Some content in intro sections was barely relevant and was essentially space filler (eg on ELISA). Not strong on relevant problems and a rather loose understanding of what a personal assistant. The abstract seems to describe a different report – in the sense that most of what’s there is not achieved in the report.
2) QUALITY OF WRITING/REPORT To a modest standard. lots of irrelevant material, and content that isn’t substantiated in the work done. conclusions non=existent. overall, lacks focus and goes off-topic. .Mention made of surveys and interviews yet none were done. EVALUATION, TESTING AND ANALYSIS no evaluation and testing done. some attempt at legal, ethical etc. Attempt to describe ‘strengths’ of the work are not grounded in evidence.
Please make sure you change all these instructions provided by the supervisor in the dissertation research paper it is very important and upload a new document in the same IEEE format as the document I uploaded.