I have done those but i need someone help me to make it perfect . On the Quyen’s

I have done those but i need someone help me to make it perfect . On the Quyen’s Hotel powerpoint . At the “Reasons for choosing the Hotel ” .Can you make it like a Paragraph but still include 2 reasons for chosed the hotel (Our Attractions will be Church of Holy Sepulchre , The Coptic Orthodox Patriarchate , The Garden of Gethsemane,Yad Vashem Museaum , City of David) .And on the Quyen’s Travel Tips. At the Travel Tips page . Can you just fix it into paragraph and talk clearly about each Tip . I just need 3 Travel Tips of Jerusalem in Isreal . But lets make it like a paragraph and more discription for each . They must be specific to our target market and destination, not general.Our target market will be Cathelic , religion.They’re 2 school teachers and want to development(history,art,world religion ,and geography).