I attached the paper below. I need an overall check to make sure the sentence st

I attached the paper below. I need an overall check to make sure the sentence structure is correct, as well as grammar, spelling, punctuation, and anything else you feel necessary to be changed. The word limit is 650 words, but I don’t want to take any topics out, maybe just cut down on words by changing some word and sentence structures around. And I would like to use necessary vocabulary, but not go overboard because I would still like for this paper to sound somewhat casual.