This paper I wrote needs to be edited per the professor’s remark.Only the sections missing need to be included as he will not check the whole paper.
His REmarks are as followed
“The paper had a good summary of the company, product, and events. The risk assessment only had 2 hazardous situation and the risk was not estimated based on the class criteria. The analysis in the risk column was good, but just add in low/medium/high based on our class criteria. Review your email for the classes risk critieria so you have the right severity / occurrence / and risk classifications. The FMEA only had 2 failure modes and was not fully developed. Recommend having 10 failure modes that are fully developed. For the FMEA, use a 5 x 5 x 5 or a 10 x 10 x 10 scale. Include a discussion about how you would use rpn to prioritize and select the most important failure modes. The paper had some discussion regarding production and post – production data and was missing the updated risk / benefit analysis. It is alway good to review the assignment and the rubric to be sure you complete all the element in the assignment.”
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