Please see bellow and attached. Feedback for intro: This is a lot of informatio

Please see bellow and attached.
Feedback for intro: This is a lot of information and needs some edits to make it shorter. You need to consider your audience. Remember…You are presenting this to a person who is very busy. You have a very short period of time to make your case as to why your topic needs their attention.
Feedback on recommendations: Your recommendations focus on prevention and preventive measures but you do not provide any information on any preventive measure that would be helpful