Please add revisions according to professor’s recommendations below please. Ins

Please add revisions according to professor’s recommendations below please.
Instructor Feedback
Your thesis and topic sentences can’t be the same. your topic sentence needs to make a claim about one of the points in your thesis. Also, the play needs to be in italics not quotes. provide the scene in the context and inside of the ( ) you would put the page number you are getting the evidence from.
Keep in mind that you want to limit the amount that you are citing. you should make sure that vou do not cite more than 4 lines of text and that your response concentrates on what you are citing. So i encourage you to trim back your evidnece to only what you are going to talk about in your response. the key is your response needs to be longer than what you have cited.