Write a clear introduction with an appropriate hook, background information, and a thesis statement.

I wrote a writing assignment, I just want you to take a look at it and check and correct if there are any mistakes.
The writing assignment requirements;
Three paragraphs of a descriptive essay (250-300 words)
Write a clear introduction with an appropriate hook, background information, and a thesis statement.
Write ONE body paragraph with appropriate descriptive words, prepositional phrases, and similes.
Summarize the main points, and write a conclusion in the last paragraph.