However, you’re lacking in specificity (especially in your methods section).

hello, i need another essay done by tomorow at8 am wondering if you can do mine again, i got a 80% on the last one but i really want a 100 on this PLEASE SPECIFY THESIS. use the same topic but need the new sources 5 of them to be shcolary sources not any type of online news paper. I attached the instructions, and the proffesors comments opn the last essay this is a different paper so please re read the instructions and follow closely. if i get a 100 i will be tipping 15 dollars. Please re use the same topic from the past essay but need new sources and also please cite to instructions attached. I ATTACHED THE OTHER ERSSAY YOU WROTE FROM ME THIS IS A FOLLOW UP ASISGMNMENT.
Please include a bibliography (Works Cited page) of the sources discussed in this assignment at the
end, cited consistently in MLA style. This bibliography does NOT count towards the final page
count of the assignment.
“Feedback to Learner10/11/22 11:53 AM
Solid job crafting a proposal that establishes a place for your research and your argument, too. You’ve set up the start of a thoughtful, quality plan for your forthcoming research paper. Your proposal is formal, concise, and structured correctly—it feels like you have a good grip on the shape this project will ultimately take once it’s narrowed down and focused accordingly. However, you’re lacking in specificity (especially in your methods section). Work to elaborate and explain, and always be specific: examples, evidence, etc. There’s lots of good in here, but unfortunately, it’s a bit too general. Good work though! I look forward to seeing this plan come to fruition! And you’ve got the greenlight to move ahead!
Best,