Hi there, I would like to ask for support in a specific area of my thesis. The

Hi there,
I would like to ask for support in a specific area of my thesis.
The subject is International vocational education and training in China, South Korea & Puerto RIco.
Please look at the Introduction to get a feeling for the topic.
Targeted locations is the theoretical part. The focus here shoud lie more on blue-collar workers, vocational training and pharmaceutical industry.
As you can see I gathered information and started writing. I need support in correction, improving the content and writing style and adding content.
PLEASE ASK IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS.
Thank you