Review for interesting content, grammar and clarity. Overall, this is a transfer

Review for interesting content, grammar and clarity. Overall, this is a transfer admission essay to Boston University which is a hard University to get accepted into, I just want the essay to sound great and show my interest in the TV/Film degree Boston offers. At the top of the word document in bold is the actual transfer admission essay question that they ask you to write. Preferably hoping to have a writer who understands how to write a transfer admissions essay dealing with a Film & Television major. Thank you. (I was also told by a live chat help person to indicate that on my essay I need 585 words instead of the 550 limit for 1 page single spaced)