PLEASE: annotate and do enlargements in a clear way, unlike last time with lines

PLEASE: annotate and do enlargements in a clear way, unlike last time with lines (there is an example on how I did it attached please follow it)
I’m a high school IB student. Therefore, I strongly suggest you research how to write an IB Comparative Study if you don’t know how, as it is not made in a simple essay form. ((I attached great examples that can help guide you.)) There is no need for background information on the artist, as it is a formal analysis. Don’t forget to make it visually pleasing and annotate by using keynote if possible! I also fixed and added a couple of stuff if you could implement that on the new comparative study it would be amazing. Please include some or all of these: • Scale • Composition • Pictorial space (atmospheric and linear perspective) • Form • Line • Color • Light • Tone (Chiaroscuro) • Texture • Pattern • Materials and construction (sculpture, installation, architecture) • Time and space (time-based work) Thank you!