– My father is a businessman who I look up to and what to help in the future. –

– My father is a businessman who I look up to and what to help in the future.
– Wide range of career paths
– Develop leadership skills
– Gain a global perspective of things
– learning how to write coherent reports to even communicate with people from different cultures
– Started working as an accountant for 2 of my father’s restaurants at the age of 14 using QuickBook.
these are all examples. I’m trying to apply to Carnegie Mellon University, one of the best schools for business administration.
I want this essay to stand out and attract the attention of whoever is reading it in the admissions office and not be a boring essay. be creative.