in the introduction is to make sure you don′t include your personal opinion (whi

in the introduction is to make sure you don′t include your personal opinion (which you wouldn′t include in a professional journal article) and make sure all of your statements about problems and/or statistics include a relevant citation. I would suggest you try to find if there′s any relevant policy documents that are relevant. For the other 2 initiatives, I would also give a bit more detail about them, and don′t forget to include your analysis of whether these policies have been successful or not. If you′re running out of space, you could try to be more concise in the recommendations section.