After the first conference I made many mistakes I would like you to help me with

After the first conference I made many mistakes I would like you to help me with my teacher’s requirements, also I would like my grade to be around level 2 – level 3（best level 2 or low level3）
this time because the grade in this class is not important to me, my average is at level 1 and I am worried about failing the class. Below is a screenshot of my first conference, I hope you can help me correct it, my name is Wayne I am posting my first conference to the teacher, I don’t know if it will help.This reference is my other order.I hope to have it by 1pm on 7 January.