Writer, we need to correct things. My professor rejected Part 2. See her comment

Writer, we need to correct things. My professor rejected Part 2. See her comments below. I have to make all of these corrections. I have uploaded the Rubric again for Part 2. I have also uploaded the template you need to make Part 2 corrections on. I also uploaded again a sample Dissertation paper of part 2 that another student did in my professor’s previous class. My Part 2 needs to look like this in order for my professor to accept it. Please read my professors comments on the paper you did for me. Her comments are posted on the right side of the paper.
Part 3 is the template that you need to make prt 2 corrections on. My professor has not graded part 3 as of yet
A couple of things:
1. this assignment needs to be heavily edited. Many of the sentences are awkward, and paragraphs do not follow one cogent theme.
2. I think you should go back and listen to the recorded Zoom session about literature review. This assignment should be FULL of source citations. Most all of the info in this section should come directly from the literature.
3. Make sure that the literature is about POTENTIAL INTERVENTIONS, not the topic, itself. Student provided literature of recent studies (2014-present) investigating potential interventions in similar or related settings. 2/4 Student provided a discussion of pertinent models, frameworks or theories relevant to the study. 2/4 Student provided a summary of the findings and outcomes from the studies reviewed. 0/4 Student submitted 6 full pages of written narrative content, with a minimum of 5 scholarly sources (2014-present).3 /3 Total points for Part 2A. 7/15