VERY IMPORTANT: The Empirical study does not show which region studies are from

VERY IMPORTANT: The Empirical study does not show which region studies are from , what samples, what methods… So, overall has a descriptive style. Critical writing needs improvement. Each study you mention should have a descriptive, interpretive and critical section The descriptive part tells what the studies found and comparing and contrasting among authors. Add an interpretive line – what region, sample participant , industry it was for and limitation Then a add a critical line – so why is this study important or relevant to your Research Question or how is it connected, This is a common comment for the literature review. Follow this approach throughout. The Literature Review need to be more critical and mention more sources. Add more on how it will contribute to existing academic literature. Make sure what is written in the conceptual studies, theoretical studies, and empirical studies are correct. Find the similarities between different definitions mentioned from different sources about “Organizational Culture” and “Innovation Management”