The personal statement is for applying for the graduate Computer Science program

The personal statement is for applying for the graduate Computer Science program.
Here’s my information below:
Since I am a Computer information system major(Under a business program) student who applying for the graduate engineering program, it is a big weakness of mine. However, my major is information systems, which is related to computer programming but not deep as a computer science major student. Therefore, it is very important to emphasize my programming experience and courses that I completed in college. I also want to show my strong interest in studying computer science and narrate that I found myself more interested in coding(computer science) instead of business during college. Additionally, to be prepared for applying for the graduate computer science program and showing determination in studying Computer Science, I will take some principal computer science courses in the last semester of college. Besides everything above, I will put other details in a word doc.
Since I am applying for several schools, this is just the long version of my personal statement. If I am satisfied with the paper, I will place another order for the short version of the personal statement with you. Additionally, if the schools accept my admission, I will tip you for another 50 dollars as my gratitude.
If you need more information or details, please let me know