the final paper is to be done. I am providing the outline as well as the drafter

the final paper is to be done.
I am providing the outline as well as the drafter and the professor’s feedback from the draft.
feedback:
Biggest issue is that you are not really analyzing a promise at all? You just kind of made an assumption that firms would invest more and you went with that.
That is not what I am looking for in this paper.
When looking at the savings identity, you start a numerical example but never finish it? Ends up just being confusing as to what you are trying to say will actually happen? Then, the info is never used to analyze anything in terms of consequences?
When you look at the labour market, you really need to be sure it makes sense in reality….not sure if 5 people loosing their jobs at BMW Laval will really have a huge impact on the Canadian economy?
Explanations of the graphs themselves were good…it is just the issues you talk about before that you need to work on.
Part on vaping, I’m really not sure how relevant it really is to macroeconomics….you should just lose that part completely.
Grade: 3.2/5