Learning Goal: I’m working on a english multi-part question and need a sample dr

Learning Goal: I’m working on a english multi-part question and need a sample draft to help me learn.I need an Annotated Bibliography on the sources!Essay Feedback:1. Take a look at the introduction. The way that it is formatted in the email makes it look like your intro is three paragraphs long with Atwood in all three. For this essay, you only need two introduction paragraphs. The first ONLY will talk about Atwood and how she portrays pharmaceuticals, and the second will focus on pharma in modern day. The second intro paragraph should end with the thesis. 2. Right now, I cannot locate a thesis. The thesis is one sentence that describes the two negative effects of your issue and a solution or two–see the templates on the prompt. It needs to be at the end of the second introduction paragraph. 3. In the body paragraphs, make sure to always introduce your sources (and other relevant information) with a signal phrase (EX: The Director of the HCWH, Paul Bogart, argues “…” (citation pg#). ) A few times, you drop in info without crediting where it came from, so be careful of that. 4. Minor thing: Citations go without a comma in them (Atwood 124). No comma needed. 5. Develop the solution a bit more. I fear that you skip over it a bit. How would combining standardizations help? What does the research say? Try directly quoting from your source here.