I am not a native speaker and very new to accounting so I am quite stuck when I

I am not a native speaker and very new to accounting so I am quite stuck when I write the essay. It would be great if you can check below items for me: 1. Grammar mistake 2. Relevance (did I fulfill the guidelines from the instructors? Did i provide enough or irrelevant information?) 3. Judgement and technical problem (I am still not quite familiar with accounting so i am not confident if I elaborate the number correctly, of coz, I have handled all the calculation)
I will finalise the cover page, attachement and citation on my own